Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, there are contrasting views about what is the fundamental issue of our environment. Some people believe that, lack of some specific creatures of flora and fauna are considered as these days great environmental problem while, others disagree. From my vantage point, animal and plant extinction is a crucial issue but, air pollution problems are most important because creatures need a pure weather to be survive.
On the one hand, losing one special plant or animal may lead to disruption in environment cycle. Natural cycle is included all the creatures on the earth and all these species are linked to each other to remain alive. With human’s intervention in environment and overuse of certain creatures natural cycle will be disrupted. For instance, overfishing can causes marine creatures to die so, animals that consume sea species may be destroyed.
On the other hand, another challenges in our environment are equally or even much more substantial than animal and plant extinction like air pollution. Emission of toxic fumes due to factories and cars not only foul the air but also, ruin the flora and fauna on the earth. If the weather was polluted, plants could not grow properly, as plants need sun and clean weather to thrive.
In conclusion, this essay discussed about the most significance environmental problem in these times. Although, losing some special animals and plants are considered a vital problem, clean air is more important than survival of some creatures as pure weather has a key role in plants and animals life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'cause'
Suggestion: cause
...isrupted. For instance, overfishing can causes marine creatures to die so, animals tha...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15415019763 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73406383674 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577075098814 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.8419490958 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.277528736273 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.097751861586 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718957297398 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17676266359 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935905828745 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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