In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.
Why might this be the case?
Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In some countries, ownership is important matter owning a house rather than renting a home matter people's status is some countries.
This is an important case because people's status always matter in the society. And also nature of human from ancient time to show off by saying its mine own property set the another level od status. Human habit always want their own house, car and other property as per the financial staus. Even though they can afford small but human always want their own property. it show their status in the society and they can also have same level of respect and position in the society.
Another case is freedom of their own lives.If people have their own house then they can have their own freedom rather then in rent. They can have their own design room,amnities,own favourite paint in the wall and also they can have enough space to live. They can have their privacy also. But in renting people have to stay as per the landlord agreement. They cannot have enough space to live, they cannot paint the wall as per their design, there is hard to find the room as they wanting, so need to compromise. People have to shift their rooms as landlord desires. So , i think there is no freedom.
People who own their house can have parties, invite friends as their desire and moods and can enjoy. But in renting people cannot do that.They cannot invities friends as they want. People have to stay in limited number
whereas, there is negative point also of owning house. They have to pay more loan , there can be always tension of if some natural disaster comes then that can destroy,repairing the house. People always must have good job to earn more money because to pay mortgage loan to make the same level of status in the society. But all these tension will not be in the renting house. you just need to pay rent and stay peacefully. While renting people always search the house as they can afford. So ,there will not be any tension like being landlord.
In conclusion, though owning a home have some stress and tension but also people prefer to own house as they can say that this is mine property. This give next level of satisfaction to the people by human nature. People always want to earn more own properties and make some status in the society. For the people's nature of satisfaction on owning own property and high level of status on family and society it is important owning house rather then renting.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, whereas, while, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 21.0 7.85571142285 267% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2011.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 433.0 315.596192385 137% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64434180139 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24896917124 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.397228637413 0.561755894193 71% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0947132551 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.3461538462 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6538461538 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.42307692308 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22269531805 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0791238701465 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0600981398616 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147823870167 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0692501578775 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.58 8.58950901804 77% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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