Even if science and technology would continue to advance and improve the quality of people' lives, the most significant improvements have already taken place.
Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Since Industrial Revolution, there have been a great deal of great inventions appearing in people’s lives: locomotives, lights, computers and airplanes, you name it. Each one of them has fundamentally transformed peoples’ lives. No wonder there are people saying that the most significant improvements have already taken place regardless of how further science and technology would take us in the future. However, I still think it is too early to say so and we will never know what life would surprise us in the future.
Firstly, one could agree on me if he or she takes a reflection throughout our history to see how gradually the inventions perfect themselves. As for transportations, people might have been greatly impressed by the steam train back in 18 Century powered by steams with the speed of 20-30 miles per hour, thinking their lives had been legendarily refined by this renowned creation. Then came the combustion engine which gave power to diesel locomotive boasting its speed of 85 kilo meters an hour. With the development of technology，the diesel locomotive was beaten later by electrical train with the speed of 210 kilo meters per hour. Proudly now, high speed train, one again, awed huma beings with a faster speed up to 260 kilo meters an hour. Let alone the maglev train, which might speed to more than 500 kilo meters per hour. Till today, people still have foggy idea about what to expect next about transportation. This example applies not only to transportation, but also other fields. People’s lives have been refined time and time again by the great inventions. Hence, it is hard to say we have already got the most significant improvements.
Secondly，the most crucial thing that motivates scientists and inventors to rack their brains to make a greater move is people’s desire and we all know that people’s desire will never be satisfied. It will always serve as an urge to help inventors to march forward. Take a look at cleaning tools in our daily lives. Women were always complaining about mops at the very beginning. Leaning forward to hold them and cleaning corners of house are too excruciating. Luckily, their voice must have been heard by inventors. Inventors made cleaning robot which could suck wastes and dusts from floor and what women do was effortlessly to press a start button. And who knows what women are thinking about when they have already had the robot in their hands. Surely there will more to be expect to come to perfect our lives because human beings’ desires are never to be satiated.
Thirdly, people’s needs vary from one to one. Thus, it is never safe to say what is the greatest improvements for people’s lives. For a housewife, perhaps it is a better tool to help her escape from daily chores. For a physician, it could be an advanced operation equipment to save lives. Since there are various of definitions about the greatest improvement, we just cannot simply jump to a conclusion that there is nothing to expect our future lives.
All in all, our lives would be even better than now with the aid of technology and science for the history has told us so.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, then, third, thirdly, thus, as for, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 68.0 52.1666666667 130% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2620.0 1977.66487455 132% => OK
No of words: 533.0 407.700716846 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91557223265 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.80487177365 4.48103885553 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72128472678 2.67179642975 102% => OK
Unique words: 284.0 212.727598566 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532833020638 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 789.3 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 29.0 20.6003584229 141% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.442758805 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3448275862 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3793103448 20.6045352989 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.24137931034 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217934009947 0.236089414692 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0517822863652 0.076458572812 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721941769879 0.0737576698707 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125378443725 0.150856017488 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653078412217 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 11.7677419355 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 58.1214874552 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 10.9000537634 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 90.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 27.0 Out of 30
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