In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
In today’s world, humans have a tendency to live longer, and this global issue has been considered a rather controversial and hotly debated topic to date. This essay will show several drawbacks related to it as well as propose some pliable remedies for this topic.
To begin with, life expectancy has had an adverse bearing on the humanity. One of the foremost problems that it has resulted in is the overpopulation. To elaborate, when the average life expectancy rises, it will cause not only the decrease in mortality rate, but also the increase in the birth rate. Thus, this will make global population jump excessively and hence causing overpopulation. In addition, the disappearance of some forests or jungles was also the negative consequence of the issue. Clearly, as a result of it, people will not have enough spaces to settle, or for cultivation, and infrastructure construction; as the matter of fact, many forests all over the world will certainly be at the mercy of the human race. Last but not least, the more prolonged humans exist, the more contaminated the environment is. This may be the fact that more waste will be released in the surroundings as well as people will exploit non-renewable resources more indiscriminately.
To address the problem, I will recommend some practical solutions to this. First of all, the authorities need to curb this by having more regulations for the family planning. For example every household can only give birth to less than three offspring or impose high tax on the families that are against the rules. Moreover, the governments may also give people the reduction in tax exemptions should they follow the principles on account of human’s inclination towards money.
In conclusion, this is regarded as one of the most challenging issues that people ought to be concerned about it because of some possible disadvantages resulted from it. Therefore, there are some aforementioned remedies which I hope that they will be able to combat the issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98476234301 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584848484848 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.3223769861 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.1875 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.264476936086 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0833499981106 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549111154251 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146581783554 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0552762745969 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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