Some people claim that there are more disadvantages of car than its advantages. Do you agree or disagree?
Car is a great invention of Technology. Nowadays, a family is seen as incomplete without a car. No doubt, cars are beneficial in many ways Som people point out that its disadvantages are more I would like to mention my views on the above Topic in the following paragraphs
There are several benefits of traveling by cars. Firstly, the journey by cars is comfortable and convenient unlike other public transport. We have privacy in the cars. The seats are comfortable and relaxing. We can keep your belongings and also luggage bags in the car. It is like a small home with n the car. In addition to it, People have great freedom of movement while travelling by car. We can take the car from one point to another point and there is no wastage of time. We can take the car even to the locations where buses or trains do not go like uncommon routes or inside the narrow city areas. Moreover, car is very helpful when elders and disabled people need to travel. Also, car manufacturing sa lug industry and millions of people are working in this industry. So cars are generating a lot of income to the nation and employment to the public.
On the opposite side, bad effects of cars should not be ignored.
The increase in the number of cars leads to traffic jams on the roads which is a serious problem, especially in big cities. For example, every year half a million people die in road accidents. Furthermore, cars run on fossil fuels which pollute the environment. We know that this pollution is becoming the biggest threat to survival of human on earth. Last but not least, cars have replaced walking and cycling which is not good for health of humans All these consequences of increasing number of cars on road are of severe nature and leaving the governments worldwide with no option but to take measures urgently
To conclude, based upon above discussion, I can say that cars have brought great convenience to the people, but at a cost of environment and health. We all should do something to minimize the disadvantages of cars.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68055555556 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65433345891 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563888888889 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 82.3100438018 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2380952381 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20739231661 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633231691187 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415619320811 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11484603042 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538984328367 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, moreover, so, while, for example, in addition, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1685.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68055555556 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65433345891 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563888888889 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 82.3100438018 49.4020404114 167% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.2380952381 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1428571429 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.52380952381 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20739231661 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0633231691187 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415619320811 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11484603042 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538984328367 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.