Many people welcome the opening of shopping areas near their homes. On the other hand, some people are strongly opposed to the construction of such facilities. If the opening of a large shopping center in your neighborhood were announced, would you support or oppose its construction? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer
Everybody needs to do some shopping from time to time. Whether to shop for food, clothes or other needs. Some people support the idea of opening a large shopping center near their homes. However, others oppose it. For me, I totally support the construction of a shopping center for the following reasons.
First of all, opening a new shopping center might offer many job opportunities for those who live nearby and seeking jobs. It might offer job offers for a variety of people with variable ages and educational levels. For example, for the past six months, my two sisters were looking desperately for jobs, one of them had just finished high school and was looking for a part-time job to help her with the tuition fees for the university. The other one is an MBA holder. They both kept looking for jobs here and there but no one hired them. Last month, when they knew that a new shopping center was opening in our neighborhood, they got excited and dropped their application forms there and one week later they were both hired.
Secondly, in addition to job opportunities, it saves time especially for those who are driving long distances and waste a lot of time at red lights, traffic jams and when there is some construction work done in streets. For instance, a year ago, before having a shopping center near my home, I used to drive for at least eight miles just to reach the nearest shopping center. My kids were giving me a hard time because they got bored. Luckily, a Wal-mart recently opened a new branch in our neighborhood and since then the shopping day went smooth without any driving struggling and I saved a tremendous amount of time. Now, I have more time for my kids.
In conclusion, I totally support the opening of a new shopping center in my area, and I think that would be beneficial for my neighborhood. This is because it would provide more job opportunities, in addition, it will save us a lot of time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, look, second, secondly, so, then, at least, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 52.1666666667 63% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.0752688172 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 344.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63953488372 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56238416351 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.552325581395 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.2343242199 48.9658058833 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6666666667 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1111111111 20.6045352989 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 5.45110844103 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262448156031 0.236089414692 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101931893056 0.076458572812 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106667071447 0.0737576698707 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198631017476 0.150856017488 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0987259319976 0.0645574589148 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 58.1214874552 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.1575268817 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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