The pie charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six areas of the world.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The pie charts give information regarding the proportion of water consumption utilized in three various sectors in six areas of the world.
As figures show, the most water usage is related to the agricultural purposes in majority of areas. However, Europe and North America are exceptions and dedicate their water consumption broadly for industrial usage. Interestingly, Africa, Central Asia, South East Asia, and South America have dramatically corresponding proportion in agricultural part, and then industrial and domestic sectors play less roles on pie charts splitting unevenly in these four areas. It is obvious that Europe and North America have roughly similar figures in terms of dedicating water to agricultural and domestic use.
To sum up, water consumption in Europe and North America are distributed more equally among different sectors while other areas use water generally for agricultural purposes. However, the main role of water for North America and Europe is in industrial part.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 400, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun roles is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...en industrial and domestic sectors play less roles on pie charts splitting unevenly ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, regarding, so, then, while, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 855.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58823529412 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87673782049 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562091503268 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 281.7 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.45097560976 124% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9505562646 43.030603864 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.142857143 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 5.23603664747 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207202716774 0.215688989381 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.11003027166 0.103423049105 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625692679085 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168923730775 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0535478558367 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.3012195122 134% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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