Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In today’s world, most countries have shown great concern about public health. When this issue comes into views, there exists many conflicting opinions. Some people share the view that only by passing laws related to nutritious food could government improve the health of citizens. Meanwhile, other people are of the view that health is the problem relying on private choice and responsibility. Both of the views have their own merits which require careful consideration.
On the one hand, some people strongly agree that the government should make laws to regulate the problems which refer to public health, especially the diseases. This is shown by the following example. A recent Australian study based on dietary intake data estimated the consequences of an additional 20% on SSBs in Australia on health and health care expenditure. The results indicate that a 20% tax on SSBs would result in an average 12.6% decline in daily consumption of SSBs, and a decline in obesity of 2.7% in men and 1.2% in women over a lifetime. Moreover, this study concluded that there would be sustained reductions in the incidence of diabetes, cardiovascular disease, and some cancers. Therefore, it is clear that regulations made by governments could bring a positive impact on the health of citizens.
On the other hand, some argue that personal choices are responsible for their health. Whatever laws are issued by the government, it is no use if individuals still consume what they like without worrying whether these types of foods are good for their health. In fact, despite many laws passed by the government to try to limit the number of people eating fast food, there are about 85 million Americans eat fast food on any given day. For this reason, it is obvious that in this case, public health depends on the determination of each person.
Given the aforementioned points, it may be concluded that community health is a problem of both government and citizens. From my perspective, I am of the view that only by taking actions together could public health be improved.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04373177843 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75158428454 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556851311953 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9259606614 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.764705882 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1764705882 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.348825941886 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110705848236 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0823866438889 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213916902282 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516777773857 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.