Some people think that public health within a country can be improved by government making laws regarding nutritious food. Others, however, think that health is a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is certainly true that people has less attended their food compared to past. On the one hand many people argue that government is responsible for public health, whereas other think that this is own responsibility for fit and healthy life. This essay will be analyzed both these position before reaching reasonable conclusion.
To begin with, why people think its government responsibility because government can manage about which types of plan people grow. For example, Government of India created a law and after many harmful product are banned in last few decade as Ganjo, which badly impact on people. Apart from this, Government created a strict law about which fertilizers is beneficial for crop as a result now farmer can use it and achieve required minerals and nutrients.
However, on the flip side of coin some say that its own responsibility of which food individual select. Firstly, people has own choice to chose that product is lot of nutrients and vegetable according to their own diet plan. For example, gym people needed more food as compared to other and they generally prefer to these food, which included in their plan, Secondly, nowadays different types of fast food available in market, but this is badly impact their health which can improve obesity in their life, due to this reason this is own choice to which food is suitable for own.
In recapitulation, although there are two contrasting view regarding nutrients food, as far as I am concerned that this is our own choice to which food is suitable for people because people can easily chose food according their own ability.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 228, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun decade seems to be countable; consider using: 'few decades'.
Suggestion: few decades
...many harmful product are banned in last few decade as Ganjo, which badly impact on people....
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Line 3, column 316, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...d to other and they generally prefer to these food, which included in their plan, Secondly...
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Line 3, column 445, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'impacted'.
Suggestion: impacted
... available in market, but this is badly impact their health which can improve obesity ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, whereas, apart from, for example, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98141263941 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60864318724 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550185873606 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.6104954825 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.0 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237304587477 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100985058919 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599764275527 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158648902512 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0336764568683 0.056905535591 59% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.