You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter
-Say what the participant liked about the hotel.
-Explain why they were unhappy about the hotel.
-Suggest what the manager should do to improve the food in the futures
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to draw your attention to the services of your hotel which we have experienced last Sunday on 08 September. I organized an all-day meeting for my company ABC Ltd. in your hotel and most of the participants complained to me about the food and snacks. This is a quite disappointed situation which I have faced the very first time.
Let me explain to you thoroughly. Firstly, welcome drinks are not enough chilled and most of the members took 1-2 sip of it. Its taste is very weird seems like they are of an old date. Moreover, the snacks are not crispy and spicy. Secondly, in lunch, the salad which you have added is stale. Some participants told me that they saw hair strands in it. This is very disgusting. I think you hired freshers for preparing the meals and I also observed the waiters are not active to serve the foodstuffs to all the members. Unfortunately, one or two members suffered from food poisoning by which my reputation affects immensely.
Despite this, we both have a long term relationship, this was never before and I trusted you blindly. I do not want to spoil your image in front of the other customers so I am not giving your hotel any bad reviews or comments. But, I want to suggest you, kindly check the quality of the vegetables before putting them into the store and also taste the food before serving the customers. Moreover, I also recommended to you please examine the kitchen staff members properly. I hope this will never happen again in the future.
Kindly consider my suggestions and I look forward to your prompt reply.
Yours Sincerely,
Jane
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 937.175257732 144% => OK
No of words: 287.0 206.0 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68641114983 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57887273137 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 127.690721649 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599303135889 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 290.88556701 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 12.6804123711 158% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8051542968 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.25 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.35 16.8248392259 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6 4.34317383033 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.2895917503 0.216113520407 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709709960567 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703341128031 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149375720297 0.12726935374 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104801238685 0.0580467560999 181% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 8.37731958763 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.33 8.71597938144 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.