Each year, crime committed by young people is on the rise. What are the reasons? Suggest some solutions.
Recently, research shows that more and more teenagers have become criminals and their illegal behavior have caused serious social instability. From my perspective, the rapid development of social media contributes to this phenomenon and government should enforce restrictions to stop the trend.
The current social media, which provide people with new ways to communicate and share happiness with others, are actually imposing inevitably negative effect on youngsters. It is really common to see that the news feeds popping up every single moment on their smart phones are highly related to crimes. Furthermore, when surfing on different social networking sites or applications such as Facebook, Twitter and Instagram, students can easily access to numerous misleading information, encouraging them to commit crimes. Since most of the young lack the ability of critical thinking, they would probably be influenced by the aggressive news or remarks that they are exposed to on social internet.
To solve this problem, governments must take actions to regulate both teenagers and social media platforms. One of the effective ways to prevent students from disobeying laws is to involve compulsory legal education in everyday curriculums in schools. Through studying the importance of abidance by law in class, students will gradually establish basic legal awareness in their daily life. The other way to change the situation is to force social media companies to build up a peaceful and healthy internet environment for teenagers by filtering out dangerous information which might potentially affect them.
In conclusion, the rising number of juvenile crimes is attributable to tools people use to contact others and know the world nowadays. Under such a circumstance, legislative institution is responsible to protect the youth from being influenced by it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
... crimes is attributable to tools people use to contact others and know the world no...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, if, really, so, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6170212766 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92895780496 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673758865248 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3300969348 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0544872387774 0.244688304435 22% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.019078861639 0.084324248473 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368098809501 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0359470150696 0.151304729494 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393608059879 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.8 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.61 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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