To some people studying the past has little value in the modern world. Why do you think it is important to do so? What will the effect if children are not taught history? Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, despite the fact that the lack of influence on the current world is considered, History is still taught as a compulsory subject. The factors of that as well as the adverse effects of not being aware of passed events on the children will be discoursed in the essay.
To begin with, there are many reasons why it is essential to teach History for the children that are worth mentioning. One of the major causes is that History gives all of them opportunity to understand totally their origin along with mission the youth in the present are shouldering. Through studying, they witness how miserable people in the past was during the period of wars and requirement to build a modern society where citizens live comfortably and happily forever. Not to mention that, comprehending History plays an important role in gaining perspective. The problems they face today and in the future bare a striking resemblance to ones in the past. Therefore, the children can research how people responded to the issues they overcame to figure out the best ways to solve the similar matters without making the mistakes of the past.
Actually, if you ignore all the advantages of studying History bringing out on purpose, there will be negative influences on development of your children. Primarily, that offsprings do not know the history of the nation certainly leads to not having any ideas how to build a nation, such as whether democracy or dictatorship is suitable for their lives. For example, if children grow up without learning about the past of their homeland and become future policymakers, they will never devise the way to meet the needs of country, which means they will easily make the wrong decisions exerting deleterious impacts on national destiny. On the other hand, when juveniles do not understand how their ancestors survived to defend the motherland from invaders, it is not doubted they will have no motivation to do the same thing. A clear illustration is that Indonesian youngsters who live far from their country for a long time and do not get any information about it tend to scarcely come back to build their fatherland even though Indonesia society needs their contribution.
To sum up, it is necessary for children to be taught their own history because of not only benefits of country, but also comprehensive development about personality and morals of themselves.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, if, so, still, therefore, well, for example, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 66.0 41.998997996 157% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2003.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 398.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03266331658 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46653527281 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77232246031 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572864321608 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 621.9 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.4770109181 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.071428571 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.4285714286 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256086612424 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0800287054843 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359136922103 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132023566696 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364715690928 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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