In some cities, there are few controls on the design and construction of homes and other buildings, and owners can decide on the style of their houses. Do the advantages of this outweigh the drawbacks
Most of the city's government has fewer restrictions over what their citizens should build either houses or building for workplace and thus there residents think that they have freedom to shape their houses what they want, however, if there are not allowance and supervised control by the government ,although it would result in many drawbacks which outweighs its advantages
The greatest benefits of construct and design houses or an office without government control is people can fulfil their personal perefence as every human dream about their own house which might be their dream place, as a result they want to design their house or office on their own which can cater their need, which may also be result in creativity. For example; i had seen a house of a photography lover, who turned the dream into grand reality by build his house in a camera shape, which was later changed into creativity. Hence this lesser control by government can give to a sense of satisfaction and contentment.
However, the main consequences of this could be more as having the freedom to build and design can affect the safety standard, due to the fact that different countries vary according to natural hazards which happen very often can result in natural disaster, which, surely, causes great damage as well as the loss of lives.one particular instance of that is in hilly area where many homes build there have not been approved by the government as such there many widespread disruption happen,that is why official guidelines and strict building code should mandatory.
To conclude,i think although there are clearly advantages of allowing architecture or homeowner more freedom, however, it would be dangerous for environment.
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16014234875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64777292938 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572953736655 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 56.0 20.2975951904 276% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 255.943274965 49.4020404114 518% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 290.0 106.682146367 272% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 56.2 20.7667163134 271% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.4 7.06120827912 261% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272310793983 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12004016639 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081929354171 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143550034553 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794348523128 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 31.0 13.0946893788 237% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.64 50.2224549098 29% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.1 11.3001002004 222% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.54 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.29 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 24.4 10.1190380762 241% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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