You should spend about 40 minutes on this task In many workplaces online communication is getting more common than meeting face to face Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages You should write at least 250 words

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In many workplaces, online communication is getting more common than meeting face to face. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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After 20th century,it was observed remarkable development in field of technology.With increasing technology,researcher as well as have developed many software applications.The development has played its role in shaping world to an another extent.The field of technology have increased progressively after every successful year.

Nowdays,Engineers and many researchers have developed many software application which may be useful to numbers of companies.The employee at workplace uses online communication applications,accounting application,microsoft application etc. at large scale.Out of this,online communication have played important role at workplace as meetings,interviewes are taken with help of this application.The people at any location in the world can attend metting's at any desireable time.The online communication has played important role in pandemic of COVID-19.As employee meeting and boards meeting are conducted with this online communication application successively.Even during pandemic,companies were very ease to carry out work.The interviews of many employee were conducted with help of these application.

As seen every new invention also arise negative outcomes with its positive outcomes.Such as online communication won't let to identify any person ability and discipline.The long hours of online communication can causes misconception.The records of any meeting is difficult to maintain.The online communication and face to face meeting has its own importance.As face to face meeting can be more effective such a person who is giving face to face interviews infront any company employee may get little nervous feeling or stress and questionair can sit for long hours with interviewers as compared to online.In online communication proper transperancy is not achieved and violate some rules and regualtion of any company.The students learning online classes lecture from this application duing COVID-19 pandemic found out to be wrose situation of parents.As students lack of studies and attention may cause students result to fall sharply.It has been observed that people using this online communication application needs some advanced specification to support any meetings.

Therefore online communication have evolved with positive as well as negative outcomes.Development in any field have spaed mankind to another level but it has even some negative results too.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, therefore, well, even so, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 29.0 8.3376753507 348% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2066.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 6.13056379822 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.91866924072 2.80592935109 140% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545994065282 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 664.2 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.0 1.60771543086 124% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 67.0 20.2975951904 330% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 322.705686346 49.4020404114 653% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 413.2 106.682146367 387% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 67.4 20.7667163134 325% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.8 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202912205901 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107663564629 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556492832478 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111578286499 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065570335274 0.056905535591 115% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 41.1 13.0946893788 314% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -30.37 50.2224549098 -60% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 19.3 7.44779559118 259% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 34.1 11.3001002004 302% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 19.46 12.4159519038 157% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.27 8.58950901804 131% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 23.0 9.78957915832 235% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 28.8 10.1190380762 285% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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