The number of people shopping online is increasing dramatically. What are the benefits of shopping online? Are there any disadvantages?
An increasing trend for many people around the world is e-commerce. While a common opinion is that believe in the advantage of online shopping other people feel that not trustable shopping area. In this essay, I will examine the benefits and downsides of this issue and provide my overall opinion.
From an overall perspective, there are a number of advantages of online shopping. A good illustration of this that provides a width range shopping area with the best price. Perhaps the main advantage of e-commerce is having a chance to take a look product with comments of people who have bought earlier. Regrettably, people who shopping in the normal store can’t have the same opportunity to have information user experience and price comparison.
Despite these arguments, there are also various disadvantages to online shopping. One of the most obvious of these is fake sellers and untrustworthy websites. For example, if you buy a product by an untrustworthy website then they may send a cucumber or nothing just an empty box, while these websites pretended a normal shopping website and generally have a lower price than another online platform that makes people buy from these kinds of websites.
In conclusion, the advantages and disadvantages of shopping online are clear numerous and varied. I am of the opinion that you can council with people who did shopping before the trustable websites that will lead to people have a great shopping experience. We have already high security and certificated websites that would help reduce the concern of individuals about fake sellers and untrustworthy websites.
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| 2020-10-03 | murtaza | 73 | view |
| 2020-08-15 | sayam jutt | 78 | view |
| 2020-04-24 | MOHAMMAD MOHSIN | 68 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 69, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... people around the world is e-commerce. While a common opinion is that believe in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, may, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1363.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22222222222 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8584635207 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544061302682 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9883201986 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.846153846 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92307692308 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308286444137 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.118047582956 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942311357987 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.198647860451 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504556745327 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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