You would like to participate in a work-related seminar in another country.
Write a letter to the person in charge of the seminar and ask for detailed information regarding the dates, program, accommodation and cost.
Dear Sir,
My name is Harsimran Kaur and I want to enroll in the upcoming seminar named "Analytical skills" to be held in November, 2020. I would like to seek some assistance related to the details of seminar.
Apparently, the seminar is organized in Canada, which is a great opportunity for me to explore new horizons of knowledge .I would like to inquire about the exact dates of the event so that i can book my tickets. Moreover, i would be requiring the details of the seminar including the per day schedules and timings. It will help me in planning my visit appropriately.
Ostensibly, to attend this seminar i need a place also to reside for short period of time. It would be a great favor if you could provide me some information regarding some reasonable accommodation. Additionally, inform me about the full cost of this seminar. Henceforth, it will be a significant help to me from your side.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Harsimran Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 122, Rule ID: COMMA_MONTH_DATE[1]
Message: The comma is probably incorrect: 'November 2020'.
Suggestion: November 2020
...s;Analytical skills' to be held in November, 2020. I would like to seek some assistance r...
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Line 3, column 121, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... me to explore new horizons of knowledge .I would like to inquire about the exact ...
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Line 3, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...e to explore new horizons of knowledge .I would like to inquire about the exact d...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ut the exact dates of the event so that i can book my tickets. Moreover, i would ...
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Line 3, column 222, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...o that i can book my tickets. Moreover, i would be requiring the details of the s...
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Line 4, column 36, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ly. Ostensibly, to attend this seminar i need a place also to reside for short p...
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Line 4, column 76, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...i need a place also to reside for short period of time. It would be a great favor if you could...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, hence, if, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88235294118 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0489887143 2.54303337028 120% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605882352941 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0713540447 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.4545454545 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4545454545 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250344364793 0.216113520407 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933540281812 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835532974691 0.0603063233224 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137766993188 0.12726935374 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0544099732948 0.0580467560999 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.73 8.71597938144 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 7.59969072165 111% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.