Your friend wants to send her/his children to your house for the weekend. Write a letter to him/her and say
Dear Sonia,
It was great to hear from you after such a long time. I got your letter yesterday, and I would love to have your daughter Gia over for the weekend. I am looking forward to having a splendid weekend with them.
I don't have any plans for the weekend so you can drop Gia to my house anytime. I've learned to make some new Thai dishes, and therefore, I will make those dishes for Gia. I hope she is not allergic to seafood, as Thai dishes mainly contain seafood.
I have planned a plethora of activities such as video games, movies, and one day trip to the museum. I'll take good care of her. You don't have to worry about her. Although there's not enough time left for the weekend, I have already prepared for the weekend.
All-in-All, you don't have to worry about Gia. I'm all set to have a splendid weekend with Gia.
Eagerly waiting for the weekend. Hoping to see Gia soon!
Yours truly,
Krish
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...having a splendid weekend with them. I dont have any plans for the weekend so ...
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Line 4, column 3, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ving a splendid weekend with them. I dont have any plans for the weekend so you c...
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Line 4, column 80, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I've
...o you can drop Gia to my house anytime. Ive learned to make some new Thai dishes, a...
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Line 6, column 102, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...movies, and one day trip to the museum. Ill take good care of her. You dont have to...
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Line 6, column 133, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... museum. Ill take good care of her. You dont have to worry about her. Although ther...
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Line 6, column 173, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
...dont have to worry about her. Although theres not enough time left for the weekend, I...
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Line 7, column 17, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...pared for the weekend. All-in-All, you dont have to worry about Gia. Im all set to ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...-All, you dont have to worry about Gia. Im all set to have a splendid weekend with...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
look, so, therefore, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.38823529412 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.14688959849 2.54303337028 84% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623529411765 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 228.6 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.7391493428 44.8134815571 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 53.2857142857 76.5299724578 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1428571429 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196203454883 0.216113520407 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745712200253 0.0766984524023 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705535872272 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102296849453 0.12726935374 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0566499568984 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.3 8.37731958763 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.29 8.71597938144 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.