private schools offer children opportunities that public schools do not and all the parents who can afford to send their children to private school should do so.
Schooling is the first step towards shaping your personality. They cultivate children's interest and assist them to grow intellectually. we are often in a dilemma whether to send our children to private school or public school? i clearly believe that if one can afford public schooling they school definitely send their children to a private school as it provides better opportunities that public schools can not.
Public schools incorporate facilities like playgroud, library, Swimming pools etc. that are equally essential abreast education. they nourish jejune kids with extra curricular activities which not only helps children to gain knowledge but also helps them to find thier interest which would not be possible in a public school.public schools are not heavy funded hence they are restrained to use their resources judiciously. Public schools focus more on education rather than other activities which would otherwise require extra funding.
In private schools they hold activities like debate , competitions, sports day which help children teach a sense of participation and competition.They provide labs and workshops which is a key factor in gaining practical knowledge. practical knowledge manifest knoeledge which makes it less convoluted for kids to understand as it makes boring theory intersting. these labs are not provided by public schools hence children studing in public schooling are deprived of practical labs and their benefits.
in conclusion, Private schools have better opportunities to offer to the new minds.Although it is true that private schools are expensive but parents who can afford it should enroll their kids in private schools. Children are very curious in thier incipient age hence thry should be given opportunity to explore thier curiousity and discren thier future.
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- the luxuries and inconveniences of contemporary lives prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals 50
- private schools offer children opportunities that public schools do not and all the parents who can afford to send their children to private school should do so 50
- The following appeared as a letter to the editor from a Central Plaza store owner Over the past two years the number of shoppers in Central Plaza has been steadily decreasing while the popularity of skateboarding has increased dramatically Many Central Pl 75
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.3162921348 97% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 33.0505617978 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 58.6224719101 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 276.0 442.535393258 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60144927536 5.05705443957 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.55969084622 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91584583645 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.4932671777 118% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 704.065955056 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 23.0359550562 91% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.884688426 60.3974514979 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.923076923 118.986275619 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 23.4991977007 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 5.21951772744 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.504211128406 0.243740707755 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189131402997 0.0831039109588 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.170303345498 0.0758088955206 225% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.330324280819 0.150359130593 220% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.140310483426 0.0667264976115 210% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 14.1392134831 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 48.8420337079 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 12.1743820225 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.1639044944 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 100.480337079 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.8971910112 63% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 11.2143820225 93% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.7820224719 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.