The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in government, industry or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the claim. In developing and supporting your position, be sure to address the most compelling reasons and/ or examples that could be used to challenge your position.
The term "Leadership" is a great skill and quality thyat should be embedded in youths while ruling the community, state, country or in the professional sector. Cooperation in all ramification plays a vital role in leadership role. We can say that if youths have a mindset of cooperation in leadership and in the industry they will surely go a long way.
Firstly, Cooperation among people gives room for progress in there actions; might be activities or projects. The young ones are not to young to rule the community or country and so, preparing them in there younger age with great leadership skills by them making cooperation and peace as there watch world. For example, currently in Nigeria, there is an issue of the young ones been brutalized by the police and as a result, young ones are been killed. If the youths that are suppose to rule the country are killed, then what will happen to the country in the nearest future? Because the older ones will surely leave the government system and the younger ones will rule. What is the joy and gain of parents who suffered immensly to train and educate there wards if they encounter an untimely death by the SARS of Nigeria? The parents cant reap the fruits of the labour just because there children were killed. Futher, Leadership qualities were displayed by the Nigerian youths who led and demonstrated a peaceful protest demanding the end of SARS and Police Brutality in Nigeria standing with one voice to reform the situation so that they can be able to fulfil destiny and lives of there fellow youths saved.
Also, youths standing and fighting for there rights displayed a great leadership, while sense of cooperation is instilled in young ones they tend to move fast and go far in there plans and achieve greater results. Two great minds are better than one, which implies that instead of competiton which may arise to fight, unlawful actions, hatred and death among youths, togetherness and oneness will speak for them. For example i in the recent competition for final year students of Lagos State University, my Alma Mater, a pitch competition was initiated and the winner will be empowered with 5 million naira. As a result, a team of 4 groups were set and some joined to form a group of 2 to 3 and we also had a group of only one individual. A lady had great digital skills and the other guy had business skills and they were able to collaborate and formed a group, while the individual ws ready to compete with her training skills, but at the end of the day the group that joined to bring in there skills, joined effort, time, and they were able to counterfeit each others opinion and arrived at a great conclusion won the pitch competion, while the only individual lost because there was no one to criticize or give her better opinions.
Despite collaboration at crucial times to achieve a high result, not only can we say that living life is not a competition, every one has to move at your own pace and time because if you are in a race with someone then you might miss the end goal. For example one might be a fashionista and a brand influencer but because you want to look good and exactly as your friend doesnt warrant you to do illegal stuffs just to get money to buy material stuff and meet up to ypur friend standard who is gaining from the brand influencing job she has which you dont know.
Conclusively, Either in education, business world, Government, the youths should embrace that prominent skill of peace, cooperation and mutual agreement in there endeavors because it pays on the long run. You cant rule the people without having to cooperate and having to understand the system at hand.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, still, then, while, as to, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 19.5258426966 133% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 36.0 14.8657303371 242% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 33.0505617978 100% => OK
Preposition: 79.0 58.6224719101 135% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3046.0 2235.4752809 136% => OK
No of words: 647.0 442.535393258 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70788253478 5.05705443957 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 5.04343084457 4.55969084622 111% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60527548922 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 317.0 215.323595506 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.489953632148 0.4932671777 99% => OK
syllable_count: 945.0 704.065955056 134% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 32.0 23.0359550562 139% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.4949229447 60.3974514979 161% => OK
Chars per sentence: 152.3 118.986275619 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.35 23.4991977007 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85 5.21951772744 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 7.80617977528 167% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196956925987 0.243740707755 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0604949945022 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050125522617 0.0758088955206 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103957675178 0.150359130593 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0206963244811 0.0667264976115 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.1392134831 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.46 48.8420337079 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.1743820225 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.63 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.38706741573 100% => OK
difficult_words: 131.0 100.480337079 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.8971910112 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 11.2143820225 132% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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