Some people say that advertising encourages us to buy things that we really do not need. Others say that advertisements tell us about new products that may improve our lives.
Which viewpoint do you agree with?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is the opinion of some people that, advertisement endears us Into buying what we are not in dire need of, however, some other people's school of though is that advertisement brings to our awareness new products or services that have the propensity to make our living easier. Many advertisements are sugar coated with make believe acts, while some others are genuinely out there to improve our lives.
On the one hand, many advertisements are out there to trick people into buying their products. These adverts are exaggerated and the products are not as effective as portrayed in the media or print. Also, many advert agencies makes use of celebrities to advertise their products, which are not necessarily needed by the populace, however, the influence these celebrities has on their fans pressures them into buying many products that they do not need.
On the other hand, advertisements are very good avenues to inform the general public about goods or services that would improve living conditions. To illustrate, many office gadgets that makes office work faster and more efficiently can most times be discovered through advertisements.
Furthermore, medical advancements over particular terminal illness can be made known through advertisements. Also, advancements in science and technology can only be made known to the people through effective advertisements.
To conclude, advertisements can be a tool to trick people into purchasing what they do not really need, however, advertisements also brings to awareness the products or services that would inevitably better the living conditions of many people. As a result of this, advertisement is good but people need to weigh their scale of preferences before buyingo goods advertised.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 71, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...nts are very good avenues to inform the general public about goods or services that would impr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, really, so, while, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40510948905 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0662169348 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.532846715328 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.5802349869 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.636363636 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9090909091 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.45454545455 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266574466853 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996504556557 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0844974123218 0.0667982634062 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143240899257 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0993203191459 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.