Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
No one can deny that there are both positive and negative aspects of various working time tables. However, if I were forced to choose, I would definitely choose to work three times a day in extended hours rather than five days a week in shorter hours. My firm belief that working longer on specific days a week is more appealing for a number of reasons, and I will develop these ideas in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, having compact working days will allow the employees to concentrate on additional activities besides their primary job. Even if the employees have to work hard in three days, they will have a chance to follow their intentions for the rest of the week. These intentions might be leisure activities, education, or a second job. I have to admit that my opinion on this matter has profoundly influenced by my own personal experience. Three years ago, as a college student, I was hardly in need of a job that could cover my college supplies fee. Fortunately, I found a part-time job in a bakery, which I had to work on three days a week, 9 hours per day. As a result, the working days were flexible and perfect for me to adjust my class schedule. For this reason, I got the chance to cover my fees and study at the same time.
Secondly, the employees can concentrate more effectively on their tasks by working on certain days a week .Separated and interval working days can distract the workers from their duties. It not only extends the duration of fulfilling the taskwork but also reduces the quality of the outcome. From my own experience, whenever I focus on a task for a limited time, the result would be surprisingly more admissible than an outcome of a long term process. Moreover, My errors and mistakes would increase whenever I pass my daily tasks to another day due to distraction from the core of the issue. It is certainly clear to see why working in compact hours in half of a week time will increase the performance of
In light of the reasons mentioned above, I firmly believe that working in half the week with extended daily working hours will positively affect the worker's life by offering more off-days and, more importantly, increasing the quality and performance of the job that is done.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in short, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 9.8082437276 143% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 38.0 43.0788530466 88% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 52.1666666667 104% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65491183879 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6333829014 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 212.727598566 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523929471033 0.524837075471 100% => OK
syllable_count: 583.2 618.680645161 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.3877363578 48.9658058833 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 100.406767564 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8125 20.6045352989 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 5.45110844103 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.360830926333 0.236089414692 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121383947582 0.076458572812 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0835347271943 0.0737576698707 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236495539918 0.150856017488 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480240240875 0.0645574589148 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 58.1214874552 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 10.9000537634 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.01818996416 104% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 86.8835125448 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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