A friend of yours recently gave you a nice birthday present. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
* thank her for the present and say why you particularly like it
* describe some other presents that you received
* explain some of the things you did on your birthday
Dear John,
I am writing to you pertaining to the present that you have gifted me on my occasion which we celebrated exceptionally well. I was not expecting you to gift me the mobile phone which is actually very expensive, and it has been a best possession I have ever received so far.
I am thankful and contended to have the device as I was already struggling with enormous things which I think can be resolved easily now. It has the uncountable features especially, downloading any type of data in any format which was the big issue earlier and now I can incorporate or make a full use of it in my assignments. However, some of my near and dears also blessed me with gift cards, shirts merchandise, play station etc.
I remember, we enjoyed many activities such as musical chairs, singing, mimicry and many more which indeed motivated elders to take part with their kids, made up the best moments. We had a pool party specially for youngsters that created a hype of my birthday party where, capturing all those moments would have not been possible without your gifted present. I will never forget this in my entire life, looking forward seeing you soon.
Yours friend,
RT
- Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
- Some people believe that teaching music in schools is a vital part of growing up and the human experience whilst others believe that teaching music in schools is a waste of time and resources Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
- You and your family have just come back from a holiday staying in a rented apartment overlooking the sea The apartment was very unsatisfactory Write a letter of complaint to the manager of the agency from which you rented the apartment In your letter give 84
- Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally Discuss both sides and give your opinion 78
- Many people like to wear fashionable clothes While other think it is a waste of money What s your opinion 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 228, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...ctually very expensive, and it has been a best possession I have ever received so...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...session I have ever received so far. I am thankful and contended to have the d...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, however, if, look, so, well, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 937.175257732 105% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72596153846 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64438373683 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682692307692 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 302.4 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.5084355363 44.8134815571 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.222222222 76.5299724578 143% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 16.8248392259 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 4.34317383033 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184163562676 0.216113520407 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085253732059 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794869443907 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107018902181 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617959369177 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 8.37731958763 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 70.7449484536 80% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.45 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.