Nations should suspend government funding for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The arguer claims that the government funding for arts should be suspended when a great number of citizens are suffering from hunger or unemployment. I tend to agree with this argument.
Firstly, there is a great possibility that there are plentiful nations lacking enough resources and financial support for the prosperity, especially for those undeveloped countries, such as ones in Africa. In this case, the most adverse social issue which is needed to be considered firstly is the imbalance of the poverty and the rich, including the problem of hunger or joblessness. If the governments cannot pay attention to solve this tough problem, then the public would be unsatisfied with the power, which may trigger to the convulsion of the society. Due to the limit funding, it is reasonable for the governments to cut down some expenditure in some fields, such as public service in culture. Therefore, the financial budget for supporting arts industry is supposed to be sacrificed for improve the living standard of the public.
Moreover, due to the significant difficulty of solving the problem of starvation or unemployment, the government with inadequate financial budgets are supposed to choose the most efficient way to deal with it. Therefore, adjusting the investment in other fields which import is not so obvious in the short turn can release the financial pressure in helping people in hunger and who are jobless. Obviously, the arts cannot have more current effects on the citizens’ daily life, for it mainly includes quantities of style which are too austere to be accepted by the public. People with less education would probably consider it is unnecessary to build an art museum instead of a factory that promotes endemic economy. Hence the policy of supporting the arts first rather than putting money into declining the rate of hunger or joblessness could be rejected by numerous practical citizens.
However, we should not ignore that, in some circumstance, the policy that suspending funding for arts because of the problem of hunger or unemployment is unnecessary. For instance, the authority should consider provide more jobs by supporting the development of the arts industry, such as building art museums, constructing arts centers, and investing arts-related tourism. Then the job-seekers can have more opportunities in receiving offers, so that the issue of unemployment will be released. In addition, the government can spend budgets in some arts activities and programs which connect with food-saving, to arise the aware of saving food in the society, since wasting food plays a critical role in triggers to the hunger. Without ruling out these circumstance, we cannot draw a conclusion that the government should suspend the financial support for the arts when significant numbers of their citizens are hungry or unemployed.
To sum up, while sacrificing the arts for giving financial support to the hungry and the joblessness has several flaws, it is indispensable to implement this policy, since it benefits the public and promotes the social welfare.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 717, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
... factory that promotes endemic economy. Hence the policy of supporting the arts first...
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Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'arts'' or 'art's'?
Suggestion: arts'; art's
...bs by supporting the development of the arts industry, such as building art museums,...
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Line 7, column 667, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...are of saving food in the society, since wasting food plays a critical role in tr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, while, for instance, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.4196629213 121% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 66.0 58.6224719101 113% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 12.9106741573 155% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2602.0 2235.4752809 116% => OK
No of words: 491.0 442.535393258 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29938900204 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.70728369723 4.55969084622 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93029991578 2.79657885939 105% => OK
Unique words: 253.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515274949084 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 800.1 704.065955056 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.99550561798 160% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 23.0359550562 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0740132079 60.3974514979 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.555555556 118.986275619 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2777777778 23.4991977007 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 5.21951772744 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 7.80617977528 38% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 5.13820224719 195% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272893106108 0.243740707755 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090131104702 0.0831039109588 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632580703956 0.0758088955206 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165486951343 0.150359130593 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.077698043403 0.0667264976115 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 14.1392134831 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 48.8420337079 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 12.1743820225 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 140.0 100.480337079 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 11.2143820225 114% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.7820224719 119% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 83.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 6
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