Some people say that sports play an important role in society. Others, however, think that it is nothing more than a leisure activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
In this contemporary society, many people believe that sports bring many merits to people’s life, especially in term of health condition. However, the others argue that such a leisure activity plays the most important role in society. In my personal perspective, although I cannot deny the benefits of recreational stuffs, I’m of the opinion that sports are more essential to each individual ’ s life.
On the other hand, I understand why many people of the fervent conviction consider that leisure activities bring about significant benefits to humans. To begin with, entertainment is the most useful tool in term of easing the stressful feelings from an intensive work or study. For instance, after spending time playing electronic games, kids receive a great sense of happiness, effectively recharging their batteries for later performances at school. Moreover, broadening horizons is what the main benefit of recreation is all about. In addition, some leisure trips to different nations provide people with more experience about cultures and traditional costumes. Hence, since leisure activities not only help people to gratify their entertaining demand but also obtain better understanding, they can act as an important role in this recent society.
Despite the reasons described above, I still believe that sport should be appreciated for its essential function towards people’s life. One of the main advantages related to sports is a better health condition. While playing football helps athleticsn gain more persistence and build muscles, women become more flexible and possess fitted bodies after participating in yoga class. Moreover, sports can also act as a different type of leisure activity. It is the modern world that many residents incline to get involve in a sport match when they have spare time. Although these normal people cannot play as well as athletics, they actually succeed in relaxing after playing sports. Hence, it may be really erroneous if humans underestimate the positive impacts of sporting field.
Taking everything into consideration, although I cannot deny the considerable merits of entertainment, I still believe that sports are more essential in these recent days.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, hence, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, well, while, for instance, in addition, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1881.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88222975908 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616959064327 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 582.3 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.974616195 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.647058824 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1176470588 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.35294117647 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240611548346 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0736142254613 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547078471826 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141274533713 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0578869238417 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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