Fossil fuel, such as coal, oil, and natural gas, is extensively used in many countries that cause harm to the environment. The use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, however, is being encouraged in many countries. Is this a positive or negative development?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.
The extensive extraction of natural resources like crude oil, coal and natural gas around the globe is the major reason causing harm to the environment. Although, after realizing the imbalance in nature many countries have now started opting correspondence source of energy which I believe is a positive development and a baby step towards healing the environment.
Due to increase in population the consumption of non-renewable resources to meet the needs of human beings have also increased. This resulted in the reduction of those resources and promotion in global warming related issues. The fact is, everything is interrelated. To produce natural resources like coal and crude oil, one has to deforest trees and dig a huge hole in the earth. Consequently, this will expand the dessert and increase the temperature on earth and again in reaction global warming takes birth.
Many developing and over populated countries still can’t avoid the use of natural resources because of the unavailability of latest technologies in their country. For example, excessive use of fuel vehicles cause noise and air pollution, use of coal to produce electricity out-turn the deforestation. Moreover, all this are silent killer and give birth to natural disasters like earthquake, flood, bushfires and many more.
However, many countries have took the initiative to increase the use of non-renewable resources like solar, wind and hydro power. These countries have established solar and wind farms substitute of coal to increase the production of electricity. Additionally, they also invented hydro turbines for manufacturing electric power. Furthermore, to deduce the fuel consumption electric cars and scooters has been introduced that run on batteries.
Conclusively, I feel that increment in use alternate source of energy will indirectly decrease the level of global warming and help in healing the mother nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the latest'.
Suggestion: of the latest
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Line 6, column 30, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'taken'.
Suggestion: taken
...any more. However, many countries have took the initiative to increase the use of n...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, moreover, so, still, as to, for example, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53741496599 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07027385048 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56462585034 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.8267395135 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.533333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359910043962 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993859726207 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737741358035 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180733929876 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772428779908 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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