Some people prefer to live in a house, while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in a house compared with living in an apartment?
Some people often argue that it is the time to move from the countryside to a metropolitan city, and in the city also they prefer living in large apartment blocks consisting of an ample amount of amenities such as swimming pools and gym, even though they are not even using the same. In my opinion, one should think carefully before spending a lot of money on a home and then spending the whole life paying the house loan.
On one hand, most everyone prefers a flat in big apartments as it provides an impact on living standards. Firstly, it can bring access to tons of amenities and there is no need for traveling from one place to another for after job/school activities. Secondly, very little maintenance as all the formalities are rapidly done by the apartment owners, as they have respective contractors which take care of specialized needs. Lastly, closely connected to public transport, so they might get the luxury of metros and not be stuck in traffic congestion.
On the other hand, standalone houses are much cheaper so eventually easy to afford. Moreover, individuals can architect the house in their own way. Secondly, a lot of privacy is there as compared to apartments, where your neighbors might be able to hear everything that goes on in the flat. Last but not the least, no big down payments to be made as each and everyone can buy according to their needs.
In conclusion, considering the aforementioned points, even though it is trending to buy huge apartment blocks, rather they are more disadvantages to buying. Even though they may not seem obvious, but they are numerous and serious.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
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Suggestion:
...ous, but they are numerous and serious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84476534296 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7331834087 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606498194946 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.6269194425 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.833333333 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19447379118 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607227188299 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0718952209787 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102005904909 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0401134999974 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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