Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities.
Does this situation has more advantages or more disadvantages ?
In this world of inflation, which is mounting by leaps and bounds, everyone is in the rat race to coin a hefty amount of pecuniary by devoting substantial amount of the time to work in lieu of recreational activities. Be as it may, it can innumerable repercussions than benefits which will be elucidated below.
At the outset, this has deleterious effects on the physical and mental well-being of an individual as by working for prolonged hours masses can suffer from various maladies merely due to lack of physical activities. Corpulence, for instance, is common these days and an article in The Hindu, one of the not only most of authentic but also sought-after newspapers of India, stated that employees who work for longer periods are more likely to sit on one chair and become obese which on the contrary is not the case, if an individual is working for limited time and bestow equal value to leisure activities like sports. Apart from this, it can also become mentally exhausting as working from dawn to dusk can affect the inner serenity of an individual. To cite an example, depression, most trivial ailment, is often seen in people who work rigorously without any breaks. That is why, it can deteriorate the health atrociously.
What is more, the relationships of such workers can also suffer as they do not spend quality time with their loved ones, thereby, causing war of words, misunderstandings, et cetera. To exemplify, it is often seen that progeny whose progenitors are busy in their work or not likely to build a healthy relationship with their folks. Spending extra time at work, therefore, can ruin the bonds between a family.
To conclude, although it can be challenging, everyone should learn to keep a nice work life balance, whereby, can enjoy a cheerful life with their loved ones healthy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91883116883 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84705087493 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594155844156 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.5380610344 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.727272727 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.0 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172714182103 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05769706834 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460707644348 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0855293250317 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573981689518 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.