Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?
There is no doubt that adventure tourism is leading the race when it comes to vacation choices of crowds ranging from youth to senior citizens. Masses are losing interest in planning trips to hill stations, beaches which used to occupy the top spot in everyone's bucketlist. Now-a-days, tourists started taking interests in places that are rarely explored by regular people. Such choices come with their own advantages and disadvantages which I will be discussing in this essay.
Starting with benefits of opting for destinations that offer extreme conditions to survive, it goes back to the tourists' perspective of making every second of the journey count. Satisfaction such tours offer need more than words to describe the experiences. For instance, places like Antarctica where months pass without any sunlight sound very interesting and when one gets a privilege to experience such opportunities, it offers immense joy. Secondly, the challenges involved in sustaining such extreme weather conditions give an adrenaline rush to the participants and hence become cherishable moments of their life.
While it is established that there are benefits that such tourism offers, there are also challenges that could cost one's life when taking a different path from the usual. Majorly, one needs to be practical and aware of their own medical conditions to determine whether they are in a position to attempt such endeavours. There had been incidents where tourists who failed to do this check and ended up in more critical situations that put them in intensive medical care units. Another disadvantage is lack of proper amenities in such extreme conditioned areas. It is evident that the climate in such places is not suitable for human survival because of which there are limited options for accommodation, medical facilities and so on.
To summarise, although places that have tough conditions might seem to be exciting and thrilling to explore, tourists need to exercise caution and make a better judgement based on their own limitations. The aim of any vacation is to experience something different from humdrum routine and enjoy life without stress so vacations itself should not become stressful. Everyone needs to explore options based on their own interests and what matters to them in their lives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 113, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'tourists'' or 'tourist's'?
Suggestion: tourists'; tourist's
...ditions to survive, it goes back to the tourists perspective of making every second of t...
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Line 7, column 117, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...ere are also challenges that could cost ones life when taking a different path from ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1948.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30790190736 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78344776589 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588555858311 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4828606666 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.75 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270820997835 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0816921834439 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0501451687562 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157759021038 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788562232402 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.