In some cultures, older people are valued most highly. In other cultures, youth is valued more than experience. Discuss both views and give your opinion as to which age should be most valued.
In some civilizations, elderly people/ senior citizens always get high respect and esteem from communities. However, in other cultures, they are being ignored while the youngsters with their energy are considered to be the spotlight of society. From my point of view, both of these generations should be valued equally because of their significant contribution to our modern community.
On the one hand, the old generation is revered for their abundant/profound experience and precious knowledge which were obtained by going through many tricky situations throughout life. Firstly, their experience is arguably the basic/fundamental foundation to develop a strong nation. They took initiatives, endured a miserably hard period dedicating their time and energy to the establishing and developing of their countries . Thus, we have to show our respect towards them. Moreover, most older people are much less impulsive than younger ones which enable them to make better judgments as the result children often ask their parents and grandparents for advices, guidance in important matters.
On the other hand, youngsters are the back-bone of a nation. As they are able to promote the development of society, most governments give priority to juveniles in terms of education. Youth is the time when they can accomplish many things and also the period that they are independent, potential and have the ability to adapt with technology. In the other words, youth represents hope, possibilities and energy which means they are important factors of society and deserve to be respected. Young citizens are also the beacon (tia) of hope and the driver of the future.
In conclusion, personally, underrating one of these two generations will break the balance of an ideal society. Therefore, both should be valued
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1522.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41637010676 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02919914871 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612099644128 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5667451243 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.466666667 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209398626047 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683680885213 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0812061613169 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122949017077 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0404526231071 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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