Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is a common belief that protecting the environment is responsible for only governments and large companies over the world, and it is not necessary for every individual to take action. However, I firmly believe that we need to share responsibilities to address environmental problems and save our planet together.
To begin with, the resident is one of the most critical factors that can affect the decision of governments and businesses. Governments can launch many campaigns to advertise the green lifestyle. But these projects will never succeed if there is nobody paying attention. In the same way, enterprises can release many reusable products or goods made from materials for recycling, however, if no one consumes and supports them, businessmen will have a tendency to eliminate them and direct their companies in a less eco-friendly way. Therefore, the resident's attitude and contribution are extremely important.
On the other hand, many little things can create a big change in the world. By way of illustration, each individual is aware of banning plastic bags, giving a decrease in the number of persistent waste on a daily basis. In addition, people can impact each other by sharing their information and knowledge. A person, especially a famous one, can set a good example for others to follow. And day by day, many people are aware of the seriousness of environmental problems and go green together by way of crowd effect.
In conclusion, governments and large companies can widely influence our environment with their authority. Besides, I suppose that every citizen plays a vital role in the process of dealing with environmental issues as well as protecting the Earth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 548, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'residents'' or 'resident's'?
Suggestion: residents'; resident's
...a less eco-friendly way. Therefore, the residents attitude and contribution are extremely...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, i suppose, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1426.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22344322344 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05037386059 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608058608059 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2399815992 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.857142857 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5714285714 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189723040331 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651868814268 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672808110683 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113714292865 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0168825924621 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.15 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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