Young people are often influenced by their peers Do the advantages of peer pressure outweigh the disadvantages

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...rdless, this phenomenon also means that their are a lot more easily affected by their...
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Message: Did you mean 'greater than'?
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...ve impacts that peer pressure brings is greater then its positive impacts? This essay will g...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...ts that peer pressure brings is greater then its positive impacts? This essay will g...
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...er my reasons and supporting examples. First of all, peer pressure can cause me...
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...on might not want to do that, but due to the peer pressure he or she have to enga...
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...but due to the peer pressure he or she have to engage in certain action, otherwise ...
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...t’s only bored people will watch these. Since that I never see him to share any Japan...
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...ble to causes mental health problems. On the other hand, peer pressure can hel...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, really, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, i think, as a result, first of all, in other words, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1880.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 390.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82051282051 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44391917772 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43939829401 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517948717949 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4940343011 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290691140696 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105959052349 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0695665350818 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192506690939 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499070108913 0.056905535591 88% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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