The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in the school curriculum?
Artistic sphere comprising art, music and drama are essential elements of our daily life. I believe without any shadow of doubt that it had a great position in past , has in present and remain in future too. This essay reveals the reasons behind this and importance to incorporate in school level curriculum.
In my point of view, arts is a way to express human creation and fiction of different theory. In modern society, it has a major impact because people depend on technology to carry out their basic things. Emerging technology is one of the features of art. For instance, people are using vehicle to go grocery rather than walking. In addition, Music and role play are also major elements to maintain our life sustainable. It is a means of diversional therapy for people who have low mood or prolong suffer from major health problem like mental disease. For example, In health care center therapist usually use music to divert mind of bed ridden patient which may help them to overcome the problem to some extent.
On the other hand, incorporating art sector in schoolbook is important. There are several reasons behind this among them transfer cultural tradition to next generation is the major one. Because school is the place where students learn most in their young life. If it comprise on curriculum they will understand the importance their culture in early life. As a result they motivated towards preserving their tradition in future. Moreover, some children have hidden talent and keen to music, dance or paint so that school may play a great role to reveal their skills. For example, dancing class may be beneficial to those students with interest on dance and they can practice at school. As a result, they can achieve a dancing carrier in future.
In conclusion, arts has a great impact on our lives to make it easy while include in school level curriculum help to find out hidden talent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87116564417 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50324817744 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598159509202 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.959518981 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.5789473684 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1578947368 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36842105263 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218053970777 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0622990390682 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633984297806 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141667936477 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0406038110235 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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