The environmental problems that today's world is facing are so great that there is little ordinary people can do to improve the situation. So governments and large organizations should be responsible for reducing the amount of damage being done to the environment. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today world’s of industrialization and globalization, protecting the environment is certainly a heated issue around the world. Some people argue that government and large organizations are more responsible for reducing negative effects being caused to the environment than individuals. From my point of view, I completely disagree with the opinion above since I believe every single person can join hand and better the situation gradually.
On the one hand, I concur that the environment is mostly affected by the government’s policies and giant corporations’ activities and there are some ways that they can provide positive impacts on the environment. Firstly, the government should implement policies and regulations that prevent companies from polluting the air, water, … or reduce the carbon footprint from their daily work. For example, in some European cities, no personal vehicles are allowed and public transport is encouraged by authorities. Secondly, giant companies can improve the situation by finding eco-friendly methods of waste treatment instead of burning or burying.
On the other hand, I am more convinced that little ordinary people can change the situation enormously just by doing simple things. Firstly, people should try to sort the rubbish out and recycle as much as they can before taking it out. Secondly, renewable energy should be made the most use of in citizen’s daily life. For example in some developed country, using electric vehicles or solar energy are some of the ways that are chosen by people to reduce greenhouse gases and they are also encouraged to use biodegradable materials instead of plastic-related materials.
In conclusion, while I believe that a tremendous impact on the environment can be provided by government and corporations, the key role of individuals in improving the situation is undeniable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 403, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1580.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48611111111 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15108710175 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586805555556 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6779183219 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.666666667 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27474025204 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930198364811 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0590487800587 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160993460467 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366961600105 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.