in many parts of the world children and teenager are committing more crime.
There are boosting the number of crime in our country, for juveniles. So, it is due to the unguarded for the students from parents and also make not good friends. I will also discuss the solution to this topic.
Firstly, one of the most obvious factors is the lack of care and parents not focus on their child. Parents or another member of families are working all day not attention to their teenager also spend very less time for their child. Secondly, the teenager finds another way to crime as an online site like as a to watch movies as violence, sexual harassment, Internet and Google. Teenage also change to the meeting evil peers so that they take some drug, alcohol and unfortunately they do the crime. Hence, the inappropriate contents may cause youngsters to commit more improper stuff., for example, child make mostly committed crime in Delhi.
After, the realising situation of teenagers crime suitable punishment needs as soon as possible. Parents should be careful while in front of the child they do not watch the bad thing and not doing the fighting. Parents should also focus on what type of track of a child going on. The government should be built organisations, to learn about solving their mistake. Teachers and counsellors should help children to tackle the pressures of life they are immerse with and help them to come out of depression and stress.
In conclusion, the government should take the subject in school to not do this type of action and parents also give some time to a teenager and talk with friends so the child has some problem then they told you directly.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.76534296029 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46183976584 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57761732852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8159325676 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2857142857 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148224039583 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499286567311 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057298477017 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785206230581 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597523268292 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.77 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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