Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?
The manner of children is of paramount importance, not only for themselves but also for the whole society in the future. Teaching children how to be a civilized person has always been a general topic of interest. While some believe parents should take this responsibility, I am of the opinion that school would have an adverse effect on children’s behavior.
On the one hand, a close bond is among the best compelling reasons why children should be educated by their parents. Indeed, parents are much more straightforward to not only figure out, they can accommodate what their child’s basic needs as well in order to choose a suitable teaching way. Additionally, strong parental explanation between right and wrong could have a great impact on children’s mind. However, this thinking is flawed, in fact, in many countries, parents are so conservative to give their children strictly traditional upbringing which can do put a strain on children’s shoulder leading to the significantly increase in suicide rate in teens recently.
On the other hand, school seems to be a better place for children’s education. In this environment, children are allowed to do what they want despite following to a certain discipline. In addition to this, the flexible teaching method enables teens to be taught by videos, game building, or field trip so as to raise their awareness, develop both strategic and analytical thinking. Moreover, teachers are extremely dedicated to help to reveal student’s best skills and teach valuable life skills such as communication, compassion, presentation and more. Teachers are not only a mentor, a listener but also a friend for students to share their secret.
In conclusion, while both parents and school have responsibility for improving children’s characteristics to become fit to the society, I believe that the school seems to be a better idea.
- Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society Others however believe that school is the place to learn this Discuss both these views and give your own opinion 84
- The graph below shows the quantities of goods transported in the UK between 1974 and 2002 by four different modes of transport Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 54
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 302, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...by videos, game building, or field trip so as to raise their awareness, develop both str...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2582781457 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10723085041 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599337748344 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9262107316 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.153846154 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2307692308 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.30769230769 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283217574069 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955435713175 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648759813652 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175722205641 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0429479741347 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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