Computers today can quickly and accurately translate languages, therefore, it is a waste of time to learn a foreign language.
To what extent do you agree or disagree
While,computers are becoming popular and couli do everythings for us translation included.I think,learning foreign languages is almost useful and considerable.In this essay I will examin my view before arrived to conclusion.
To begin with,due to our lifestyle and changing the world to the global village all of us need to communicate with other nationalies, furthermore,the first things that I wanted to mention it,when you have known second language;English you will use the computer and technology advances easily ,perfectly and convenient so you can connect with other people all over the world.Moreover,uour opportunities to find the job and have better life in another location out of your native country are going up.
On the one hand,using pcs as a dictionary,books and etectra are not very useful and achievable every time and every where.
On the other hand,Not only digital gadgets which translate havenot been able to transfer our emotion but also couldnot send our meaning in a clever way without any misunderstanding.
As a result,however,using smartphones,tablets,pcs and the other things should be efficient so the life will be more cozy with them,learning overseas languages have had other benefits for us.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, so, while, i think, as a result, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1050.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.79009596349 2.80592935109 135% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 176.041082164 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.698412698413 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 506.74238477 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.053625471 49.4020404114 267% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 210.0 106.682146367 197% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.8 20.7667163134 182% => OK
Discourse Markers: 27.8 7.06120827912 394% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139442387013 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700422590917 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546931400382 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700422590917 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546931400382 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.7 13.0946893788 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.56 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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