Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In today's world, sharing information is the way to be successful. Handful of individuals think giving information out is good way whereas majority prioritize to be shared freely. In subsequent paragraphs both views will be discussed along with my opinion.
Admittedly, telling views up to the knowledge can be harmful or will not hurt as they are discussed. For instance, the sharing perspective to all including international spy will let them known about the plans and it would not hurt the regime in future. In addition to this , in business work place not discussing the ideas with other members will tend the enterprise to great loss. As a result, the sharing of information in commerce and academic world as much as possible will be beneficial.
Nonetheless, the sharing freely information will led to the benefit of the both sides. To exemplify, the discussion of ideas according to knowledge with each others without any interest will be good for them and they will share all the information. If one knows they does not have lot of views then they give their ideas for the money. Resultantly, giving perspective freely will make the benefit to the both.
° To sum up, In my point of view sharing information freely will be valuable and make path to success.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 244, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... plans and it would not hurt the regime in future. In addition to this , in business work...
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Line 2, column 274, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...he regime in future. In addition to this , in business work place not discussing t...
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Line 2, column 423, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... As a result, the sharing of information in commerce and academic world as much a...
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Line 3, column 50, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...ss, the sharing freely information will led to the benefit of the both sides. To ex...
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Line 3, column 267, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
... all the information. If one knows they does not have lot of views then they give th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, nonetheless, then, whereas, as for, for instance, in addition, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1054.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 215.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9023255814 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81140143916 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562790697674 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1131652159 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 87.8333333333 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9166666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.41666666667 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292770987124 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.134020310511 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790839243067 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.207042443616 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351628495188 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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