Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
International sports competetions have become universaly popular and every country's sports board desire to organize such games in their own county. While there is a section of public who consider it as an opportunity, other section of population find it bad. This essay will argue of both types of beliefs and explain why I support those who favour this.
Firstly, cross country matches bring abundance of benefits for the home country. It gives chance to the citizens to see those matches at comparatively lower rates, if matches held in foreign country. Also, fans can witness their favourite playes from around the world in live matches, which may not be otherwise possible. For example, Indian premium league call international cricketers from multiple countries to India in order to play cricket match that is extremely loved by cricket lovers of the nation.
Moreover, these games can be helpful in improving inter-country relationships among nations that may lead to financial, medical, military or other kind of support from those nations in the time of crisis in future. The organizing country get opportunity to showcase and advertise its cultural values and importants including cuisines, apparels, historical monuments by the medium of these players. This may prove lucrative in term of tourist attraction from around the world.
However, those who do not favour the idea may argue that such kind of events can be costly and disturb the economical state of the nation. If the home country does not have sufficient fund for organizing games and fail to raise it then they have to lend money from other countries and draw the nation in more debts.
In conculsion, I assert that helding sports events can be profitable for the nation in many ways; however the government should estimate other aspects as well in order to avoid the consequences.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 205, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...rom those nations in the time of crisis in future. The organizing country get opportunity...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, while, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1563.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.15841584158 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68636728346 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60396039604 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.7183021266 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.230769231 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.15384615385 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116646436423 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414781894807 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0312550481303 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0674232169577 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030945299023 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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