The average standard of people’s health is likely to be lower in the future in future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.
From past few decades infant mortality rate has been increased, so as the diseases. To be health is new goal of life for many people, because of less physical activity and mobility. It is believed that the average standard of individual’s health would decrease gradually in near future. I am totally agree with this statement due to various reasons.
Firstly, nowadays, most of the people have lazy life as compared to past due to advancement in technology and newly available devices. Due to automation many of the jobs require less manual efforts as compared to past, so, this lifestyle invite other diseases. Although, medical and pharmaceutical sectors evolving, so as the germs and bacteria. There are many diseases encountered for the first time like, ebola, cancer, aids, various flu and so on. In addition to that, there will be more technology and robots who make lifestyle more lazier and it will directly invite disease to human body.
Secondly, food play very important role to maintain and boost immunity in human body, but today food habit of people’s life have changed. More junk food, processed food, frozen food, and preservatives have been added to daily menu, which directly play with people’s metabolism and immunity. In future these things will increase due to fast lifestyle and taste-centre society, it will directly affect individual’s health. Apart from this, best example to illustrate these point is “Corona”. The name itself enough to threaten humanity, WHO has also announced that this kind of diseases will increase in near future, so until and unless someone has immunity to fight such disease, they will not survive.
In recapitulation, despite people may vary with their thought on people’s health in future. I am totally agree with the statement that the standard of people’s health would decrease in future as compared to recent days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 301, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... gradually in near future. I am totally agree with this statement due to various reas...
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Line 2, column 532, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'lazier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: lazier
...echnology and robots who make lifestyle more lazier and it will directly invite disease to ...
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Line 3, column 436, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the best'.
Suggestion: , the best
...ect individual’s health. Apart from this, best example to illustrate these point is “C...
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Line 4, column 82, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...y with their thought on people’s health in future. I am totally agree with the statement ...
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Line 4, column 105, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...people’s health in future. I am totally agree with the statement that the standard of...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, apart from, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7243830187 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.896933626 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.125 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205223118954 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069528151234 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0768544389124 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149086378079 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.096219397461 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.