It is better to go on a trip by oneself than to take a group tour with a guide.
Without a shadow of a doubt, traveling is one of the most appealing and beneficial activities for people in order to alleviate their stress and unwind the tensions. Hence, since time immemorial, there has always been a controversial question regarding whether it is better to travel alone or go on a trip with a group and a leader. While some people are of the opinion that travelling alone is a better option, other people believe that it is better to go on a trip with a group. I, personally, concur with this group for two main reasons, on which I will elaborate in the following paragraphs.
The first reason worth mentioning is that people can have much more fun when they travel with a group; therefore, they enjoy more. When people go on a trip with a group and a tour leader, they have this opportunity to become acquainted with lots of people and establish friendships. Moreover, tour leaders always consider amusing activities for all the members in the group , activities that require team work and are fun to do. Therefore, people can enjoy each other's company while having entertainment activities. In other words, people can enjoy doing group activities with other people they meet on their trip, and consequently, they are able to have great time together and enjoy their voyage. On the other hand, traveling alone, we cannot meet new people and enjoy group games and fun activities, which can be boring for us.
The other reason that deserves to be mention is that having a tour guide provides people with this great opportunity to efficiently use their time and visit all the nice places. It is crystal clear that tour guides are educated and expert people and they are familiar with the area or the city the group visits. As a result, they precisely know what places are delightful to visit. Moreover, not only do they know the monumental places, but they also are aware of the history behind them. Tour leaders are capable of managing the time properly so that the group can visit all the spectacular places without wasting time on unnecessary activities. My own experience is a compelling example of this. A couple of years ago, I visited a historic city in my country by myself. Because of my lack of knowledge and information, I did not get to visit one of the most famous buildings in the city. However, a year after, I visited the same city with a group and a guide. This time, thanks to the tour guide, not only did I visit that building, but I also had the chance to visit three other places that I did not know anything about them on my last trip. Had I not gone on a trip with that group and the leader, I would not have had the chance to see those magnificent historic places.
In conclusion, having all the aforementioned reasons and examples into account, I believe that it is better to travel with a group and a guide. Not only do we have a much more enjoyable time in a group, but we also have this opportunity to visit all the nice places with the guidance of the leader.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 23.0 13.8261648746 166% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.0286738351 145% => OK
Pronoun: 57.0 43.0788530466 132% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 52.1666666667 128% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2469.0 1977.66487455 125% => OK
No of words: 539.0 407.700716846 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58070500928 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.81833721656 4.48103885553 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55059300778 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 212.727598566 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.421150278293 0.524837075471 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 792.9 618.680645161 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.86738351254 214% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.6285195303 48.9658058833 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.347826087 100.406767564 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4347826087 20.6045352989 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78260869565 5.45110844103 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259314921328 0.236089414692 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898340086021 0.076458572812 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0842801129549 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177523735595 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048772549927 0.0645574589148 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 11.7677419355 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.1575268817 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.01818996416 95% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 86.8835125448 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 10.002688172 140% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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