Write about the fossil fuels and their alternatives
For thousands of years, human know how to create fire by burning wood to warm up in cold winter. By the time, people have discovered more types of fuel such as coal, oil, gases, etc. and used them for many purposes. Although burning fuel promotes the industrial development, they make our environment worse. Some people say that for the economy, environment can be exchanged in some ways. Other claim that people must save the Earth by using alternative resources such as wind, solar and nuclear instead of fossil fuels. This essay will discuss my thought on this argument.
On the one hand, fossil fuels have a crucial role in humanity evolution. Wood is burned for warming up, cooking, lighting in the past to run the engines, refine ore, calcine limestone for cement, etc. Without them, human cannot survive to today and create building, tools, vehicle and road. Fossil fuels have their own strengths: easy to store and transport, large energy density, it don’t depend hardly on weather or technology like the alternatives and the low-cost investment in fossil fuel power plants. All of those make fossil fuel cannot be replaced for a while. According to the report in U.S in 2018, fossil fuel provides about 80% of energy that Americans need, which is massive if we compare it to 4% provided by solar and wind energy.
On the other hand, fossil fuel aren’t perfect energy sources. They need millenniums to form from dead creatures on land and under sea and they cannot produce in laboratory. Moreover, using fossil fuels discharge harmful gases like carbon dioxide and sulfur dioxide which pollute the atmosphere and contribute to global warming. As the result, alternative energies are made to solve these problems. For instance, solar and wind energy are being invested by governments around the world parallel with biomass, fusion and geothermal energy. Germany is one of the pioneer in this revolution by given the law about renewable energy 30 years ago. Nowadays, Germany is one of the countries has the highest percentage of renewable in their total energy consumption.
In conclusion, fossil fuels still out weight the alternative energy in usage. However, with more concerning from people, more and more researches have been funded to shorten the distances between fossil fuel and renewable energy in cost, efficiency and storing in order to eliminate fossil fuel from the major energy resources in the future.
- In order to be successful in sport some people think you have to be physically strong Others say that mental strength is more important Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
- The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they give birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 61
- Gender equality has not been achieved in our society Women still do not have the same rights and opportunities as men To what extend do you agree or disagree 68
- The illustrations show how chocolate is produced Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make the comparision where relevant 11
- Research can find new medicine and treatment which are essential to health and disease Who do you think should fund this research the private companies individuals or governments 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 385, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'does'?
Suggestion: does
...and transport, large energy density, it don’t depend hardly on weather or technolog...
^^^
Line 2, column 391, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[9]
Message: The adverb 'hardly' is usually put before the verb 'depend'.
Suggestion: hardly depend
...ansport, large energy density, it don’t depend hardly on weather or technology like the alter...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 600, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
...r a while. According to the report in U.S in 2018, fossil fuel provides about 80%...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2037.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0925 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50071864671 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.859186621 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5909090909 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1818181818 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.59090909091 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317173698716 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868082497525 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866517288288 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.202376025915 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802778064313 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.