Education and health should be funded by the government and free for everyone to what extent do you agree or disagree
Some believe that the educational and medical costs should be waived for all people, and the government is responsible for paying them. However, I completely disagree with this opinion because it would cause many problems and free services should only be offered to certain individuals.
Having free healthcare services for everyone would put a tremendous strain on the countries' budget. If the government does not charge customers for the curing and caring fees, medical centers' limited expenditure would not be enough. Therefore, the government may allocate the budget of other sectors such as public transportation to compensate for these imposed costs, which often put these parts under pressure and negatively affect their output.
Another point to consider is that offering all people free education could be problematic for societies' resources. Many people are tempted to enter tertiary education to get a free diploma whether they are interested in it or not. A recent study done in Iran shows 20 percent of bachelor candidates have left their majors incomplete because they did not find them according to their favors. Considering the amount of money that has been spent on these programs, it seems to be a significant loss of financial resources.
Finally, the best solution would be to keep mentioned fees but still offer some free services to people with poor financial backgrounds. Otherwise, a part of society is deprived of these vital needs discriminately, which would not be accepted in modern society.
In conclusion, I take this viewpoint that abolishing education and health care fees is not feasible for most countries but offering them free to particular people who have limited financial means is a better use of a countries' resources.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1492.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30960854093 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81837952198 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604982206406 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2664509049 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.333333333 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251500980886 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953124053204 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0608081799506 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139880197961 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643278539189 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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