Nowadays technology is increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras). In many case, theh people being monitored are unaware that this is happening.
Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
At present, people are totally depended on technology, some people think that, it has been suing for the taking informatin to other. Like location and other some kind of personal details. I strongly belive that, it has cons for everyone, that companies take our data, it will be misuse by them.
Firstly, people have mobile phones, it has major part of the huma life nowadays. All types of problems are commence from that. People are doing their work online, and other important data also save in the phone as we as on the Internet. It is a main source of collecting date. After that, that data will sold by the companies. It hall all kind of data as a phone calls, bank related, personal documents and many more our details they have.
Secondly, it wrong thing, the doing misuse of the technology, it responsible for the person who face the many problems, because of it. It augmented that level, to do everything to succou of it. Also they use our phone camera without permission, that time we don't have any idea about it. Technology has their own pros and cons. It depends on the use. Maximum public use it for work. It give us many facilities, like people go on the mass help of it. This time it also important for education as well as other sectors.
I recapitulation, technology is key for the some people, they can earn from it. But I belive, that it more important is person privacy. It must have some strict rules and punishment for them, who monitor the person life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, kind of, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1213.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56015037594 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42024983187 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56015037594 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 395.1 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 20.0 5.43587174349 368% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.332027465 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.65 106.682146367 57% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.3 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191264401049 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524543874474 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0379973745778 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109382343636 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379191869815 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 13.0946893788 51% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.28 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.61 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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