In any part of the world children and teenagers are committed a crime, why is this happening ?
In a lot of countries around the world, and an increasing number of crime is commence committed by a juvenile. There are some ways to curb or alleviate the amount of crime did by youth.
In the beginning, the main reasons for youth crime is a negative family environment. Some juvenile does not have a happy life at home and thise lead them to do some actions that are not socially acceptable for attention, parents must take the responsibility to find the time from their busy lives and make sure that physically but have their emotional need take care of too.
After all, probably the general environment that children grow up in nowadays. In the other hand, the youth of today spend most of their time interacting on the Internet, which means a lack of online interaction with other people, possibly in a lack of empathy for other and so a greater willingness to commit crimes, like graffiti, shoplifting, a practical measure that could be taken on this front is to stimulate juvenile to participate in more social activities, like sports and other clubs.
Overall, while the escalation in crimes undertaken by a juvenile is a concerning trend by improving the inner quality of young people and home life also as well as helping the development of their social skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 78, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'commenced'.
Suggestion: commenced
...d, and an increasing number of crime is commence committed by a juvenile. There are some...
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Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...neral environment that children grow up in nowadays. In the other hand, the youth of today ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...mmit crimes, like graffiti, shoplifting, a practical measure that could be taken ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, while, after all, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1063.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83181818182 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73460756095 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.2975951904 153% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 122.337772631 49.4020404114 248% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.857142857 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4285714286 20.7667163134 151% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.57142857143 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.112537366565 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0597735805272 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048356537339 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0703237211586 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.055493730705 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.01 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.4 11.3001002004 136% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.1190380762 142% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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