Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Today, with the advance of media, more and more people can access to domestic and foreign news on all social issues. However, many people do not realize its connection to human life and then consider it as a waste of time. I completely disagree with this paradoxical view because of some reasons.
The main reason relates to a vast amount of knowledge which the news offers our life in many fields. In particular, reading the more news you read, the better provide you are to handle many of life challenges. The news not only gives you valuable opportunities for development in work and study, but also provides you more topics to discuss daily with family and friends. For example, when you diligently update the daily news, you will improve your knowledge in many areas, especially expand your vocabulary to improve your communication skills.
In addition, the news is also a free entertainment tool to help you reduce stress and promote mental health. After every stressful hour of work and study, reading or watching information about your favorite area as that will help you to relieve the pressure and recharge your next working hours. Furthermore, updating the news as a daily habit will stimulate your ability for memorization.
In summary, through this essay, I want to encourage people to regularly update information related to life and social issues because of the tremendous benefits it brings to our lives. You read news and watch news programs what you like and use it as a great opportunity to lead to success.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, then, for example, in addition, in particular, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 13.1623246493 15% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84496124031 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54898526513 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56976744186 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 258.0 20.2975951904 1271% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1250.0 106.682146367 1172% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 258.0 20.7667163134 1242% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 98.0 7.06120827912 1388% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302026159531 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.302026159531 0.084324248473 358% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18809697301 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624012220888 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 130.4 13.0946893788 996% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -190.39 50.2224549098 -379% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 103.9 11.3001002004 919% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.27 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 20.47 8.58950901804 238% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 56.0 9.78957915832 572% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 105.2 10.1190380762 1040% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 56.0 10.7795591182 520% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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