Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives. So then it is a waste of time to read the newspaper and watch television news programs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the past few decades, with the rapid advancement of technology, there has been a noticeable change in the way people access information. Some people are no longer reading newspapers or watching television to seek news. From my perspective, I completely disagree with this view
In the first place, as society continues to evolve, it is crucial for people to know what is happening to the world around them and other people, they need to be informed about the hot issues of society, wide announcements of the government, the country and the world to all the people, if they don’t update the information, it will be a big problem. For instance, the Covid-19 pandemic exploded 2 years ago, with a series of cases and strains everyday. Governments and world organizations (WHO) have repeatedly issued warnings and precautions, information about the epidemic. Therefore, if you are no longer watching news programs or reading news, you will lack of information and easily cause in danger.
Another reason for my belief is that reading newspapers and watching news programs can bring us huge benefits. Update the information more quickly, catch up with other people around us and not only that, access information can broaden one’s understanding of the world leading to personal and academic growth. This allows them to the ability to quickly grasp and update a lot of information, which will be a huge plus in today’s globalized world
In conclusion, it is believed that watching television news programs and reading newspapers is an effective way for people to access information. I firmly believe this habit will bring us a lot of benefits, develop more important skills, therefore news play an important role in our daily lives so people should not avoid the connection between people’s lives and news.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18518518519 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87596884835 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.2778424423 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.0 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325288106054 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145112711936 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137110207272 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209510602755 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0897929801457 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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