You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
• introduce yourself
• describe your plans for the party
• invite your neighbour to come
Dear Mr Smith and Mrs Smith,
I am Linh, your new neighbor whom you just met two days ago. As you know that we just moved to this glorious town, therefore, a lot of things that we want to know about this place which also the reason why we would love to have a party and invited our neighbor to come over.
The party maybe hold at the weekend, we are planning to have a backyard BBQ with some music along with. We would love to open for our neighbor best vocals to show off their talented by a small karaoke system with the projectors. We are thinking of starting to celebrate at 7:00pm for food with chatting and singing battle will begin at 9:00pm and all activities will be finish at 11:00pm.
We are concerning about the noise that may cause the annoy for you, however, please help us to understand that we trying to get in touch with all of us. As well, It would be a pleasure to have your family to come by and enjoy the fun.
Please let me know if you have any concern, and confirm the attendant so that we have the best preparation for all.
Your lovely neighbor,
Linh
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ty and invited our neighbor to come over The party maybe hold at the weekend we a...
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Line 3, column 133, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'neighbor the best'.
Suggestion: neighbor the best
...long with We would love to open for our neighbor best vocals to show off their talented by a ...
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Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... all activities will be finish at 1100pm We are concerning about the noise that m...
^^^
Line 4, column 4, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ctivities will be finish at 1100pm We are concerning about the noise that may cause the anno...
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Line 4, column 50, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ncerning about the noise that may cause the annoy for you however please help us to under...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 857.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 207.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.14009661836 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.04527621592 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574879227053 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 259.2 290.88556701 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 12.6804123711 8% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 207.0 16.3608247423 1265% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 44.8134815571 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 857.0 76.5299724578 1120% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 207.0 16.8248392259 1230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 53.0 4.34317383033 1220% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 7.41237113402 13% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189344577527 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.189344577527 0.0766984524023 247% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0603063233224 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109108416318 0.12726935374 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0722192394616 0.0580467560999 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 101.6 8.37731958763 1213% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -113.25 70.7449484536 -160% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 3.82989690722 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 80.5 7.45979381443 1079% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 8.21 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 15.73 7.59969072165 207% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 51.0 8.62886597938 591% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 84.8 8.54432989691 992% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 85.0 8.15463917526 1042% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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