In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people.Why is this the case?Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
In this contemporary era, purchasing a home is considered to be essential in some countries instead of renting them. Some have different views on it. I partially agree that it can have both plus and negative points. This essay shall analyze the main cause behind this notion as well as its possible effects.
Needless to say, Owning a home can have several advantages. One of the integral and indispensable merits is that by purchasing the home, people can have a sense of relief as they will not be worried about lease and monthly rent, as well as they do not have to waste time in accommodation hunting when a rental expires. Apart from this, it is more like a one-time investment which they can even sell for better profits. Another remarkable factor behind this assertion is that while buying a home, they can have a free and independent life, without worrying about any nagging of the landlord. To exemplify, tenants have to follow certain rules and restrictions in order to live in a rented place but after having their own home, they can live freely as they want, without any restrictions.
On the other hand, Renting accommodation has various potential pros. First and foremost, by renting an apartment, there will not be any hassle of investing an abundance of money in one go. For example, a tenant can save a huge amount of money by renting a place because they only will have to worry about monthly rent and can spend money on other expenses. Secondly, When a renter is dissatisfied with the accommodation then they can easily move out from one place to another. Conversely, homeowners do not have this privilege as it will be difficult for them to move out because they already have made lots of investments in buying a home. Henceforth, it would be hard for them to move out and find another place.
To conclude, It is conspicuous that either buying or renting a home has both merits and demerits. Therefore, it is an individual's choice when it comes to accommodation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, apart from, for example, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 346.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76300578035 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31289638616 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72292990886 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.528901734104 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.8083648015 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9411764706 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3529411765 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202055744787 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0733518995678 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472719590073 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13096013051 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560093939972 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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