Question: An increasing number of people are buying what they need online.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?
it is true that, in this contemporary era, online shopping is being gained lots of popularity in our world. In addition, now all things you could purchase easily whatever you want without visiting anywhere and it is best for companies and folks. According to my perspective, I personally introspect that there are enumerous pros as well as cons which I would discuss further.
To start with, teleshopping is a modern trend. Firstly, consumers could match all the prices of every product in shopping apps. Furthermore, it is great deal for consumers because they would save their money for future. Secondly, they have not to go on anyplace for buying any product. they could purchase all things in just one click. Thirdly, money and reputation are being earned by large companies. Additionally, they attract most of the people by their own advertisement. Least but not last, firms do not need to setup it own branches you could start your work without having any place. For example, I prefer to do online shopping because it is beneficial for us mostly in summer season. Moreover, I also give advice to others to do online shopping.
Looking at the other side, we could not overlooked disadvantages. First, sometimes companies deliver wrong product to consumer and it might be effect directly or indirectly on companies value. Second, lazy is being made by most of the people these days because they do not like to go anywhere outside from there home. For instance, in India many people are putting questions against shopping companies because these companies are not providing good qualities products.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly there are few disadvantages too and may be harmful for us yet, we must understand that these are the new technologies and help is being done by these companies and consumers aslo take benefits in their day to day busy scheduleI contempte that advasnli shopping
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, look, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, in addition, as well as, it is true, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03481012658 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74265234478 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591772151899 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.4107278912 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3888888889 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5555555556 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1111111111 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217309706981 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631302707311 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0509896941737 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119478013759 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435388996395 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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