In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. What extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
Living in the digitalization means that people can access to the internet in order to update the latest news or reade e-books without any difficulities and sometimes without payments as well. That is the reason why some people claim that tradition newspapers or books may gradually dissapear in the near future. In my perspective, I do not really consent on this idea.
Taking a consideration, printed newspapers and books have serveral advantages, which can be prevail in comparison with e-books. Firstly, it is the fact that those who frequently read e-books or online-newspapers may struggle with eyes problem. This is because screen of smart phone or computer can generate UV ray, which is the root of many eyes' disaster according to reachers , Hence, reading the printed one might protect readers out of this problem.
Secondly, since e-books and online newspapers are provided free of charge, they might contain a wide range of advertisements as well as virus. For instance, in order to continue to read the content, readers have to watch an advertising video for about one minuest. It may be quite annoying because they are concentrating on the main content,
Thirdly, when people decided to purchase a book, it may not only they would like to read the content inside, but also they want to make their book collection diverse. Exspecially, many ancient books can only be existed under printed. It is no way to find out authentic version on the internet. That is a crucial reason which makes traditional documents held their value and can not be taken place by the digital.
In conclusion, although using internent platform to access and read books, newspapers may help users save their budget, the printed newspaper and books with their own benefits can remain their value and can not be dissapeared by digital effect in the light of aforementioned reasons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, may, really, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04530744337 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82785497997 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588996763754 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8828611671 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.923076923 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250733389416 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.085016594738 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527697046 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137313192312 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267539090873 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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